Another attempt at poetry(sorta).

Don't be afraid to be a critic on this. I'm not very good.
I call it "Longing for You".
I am longing for you,
Longing to be held by You.
Wanting to see a smile upon Your face,
I’m running to finish the race.
Trying to stay on the path before me,
‘Till the end when I will love You fully.
Others I may hold dear,
Some far and some near.
But none can ever come close.
Through all trials and woes,
You stand strong.
And even when it’s You that I’ve wronged,
You’re willing to forgive.
You give me the desire to live.
I want to bring joy to You, in all that I do.
But so many times, I don’t know how.
All I know is right now,
I’m longing for You.